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 <br>  [[File:Est_in1.png]]
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-| * Follow Est who ist disguised as Succcubus. After some cursed monsters, you will get warped out.
+| * Follow Est who is disguised as Succubus. After some cursed monsters appear, you will get warped out.
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-| * Follow the stairs and kill the monsters on the way. If you killed all monsters the room to the chamber will open.
+| * Follow the stairs and kill the monsters on the way. Once you killed all monsters the way to the chamber will open.
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-| * You will meet the Immortal Monarch, kill him and talk to Est. (Destroy the crystal in the edge to deal damage to him)
+| * You will meet the Immortal Monarch, kill him and talk to Est. (Destroy the crystal at the edge to deal damage to him)
 <br>  [[File:ImmMonarch.png]] [[File:EstMon.png]]
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-| * After defeating Immortal Monrach head back to the village via @go 61 and follow the navi: {{#navi:ygg_edge|167|137}} and enter the portal.
+| * After defeating the Immortal Monarch head back to the village via @go 61 and follow the navi: {{#navi:ygg_edge|167|137}} and enter the portal.
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-| * You have completed Main Quest of Chapter 1 and you have now Access to Recreated Dark Whisper daily instance.
+| * You have completed the Main Quest of Chapter 1 and now have access to the Recreated Dark Whisper daily instance.
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